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Draft work feedback - 3 Jan
Some excellent work produced to date - I think that your contents page is extremely well constructed and looks very professional.
I will go through some points on your front cover which I think you can improve upon - you need some variations in your cover lines (fonts, sizes, styles etc) and I think with some fine detail, it will look great. One thing about your main cover line - I think you need to add her name to the main cover line somehow - this is a typical convention in magazine design.
You DPS is coming along nicely and the main components are all there. Again, don't forget the fine detail. Well done!
Carl.
I will go through some points on your front cover which I think you can improve upon - you need some variations in your cover lines (fonts, sizes, styles etc) and I think with some fine detail, it will look great. One thing about your main cover line - I think you need to add her name to the main cover line somehow - this is a typical convention in magazine design.
You DPS is coming along nicely and the main components are all there. Again, don't forget the fine detail. Well done!
Carl.
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